Emotion In Story
Sometimes I absolutely amaze myself. Wow, can I ever pack a scene full of emotion! I’m laughing. I’m crying. I’m deep sighing. I close my laptop feeling drenched in the scene I just wrote.
Then comes the time to open the first round of editorial notes. Invariably in each manuscript, there’s a comment that goes something like this about a scene I thought was over the top:
“Can you work on deepening the emotion in this scene? Make it more of a turning point in the story?”
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